My Pokemon Story Chapter 2

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My Pokemon Story Chapter 2

Post by Gengar on Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:43 pm

My Pokemon Story Chapter 2
When leaving Prof. Pine’s lab Maxwell heard yelling wait. When he turned it was Will carrying something Maxwell never saw before. When Will handed one to him Will said, “This is a pokedex Prof. Pine wants us to catch as many Pokemon as we see so he can learn more about them, and from now on were rivals.” Then Will ran away into the forest that lead to Silver Sail Town. Either though Pokemon weren’t his favorite thing he let out his Magby to follow him. On his way into a forest he saw different Pokemon like Pidgey and Sperrow. He wished that he could capture them but he had no pokeballs. Then Maxwell heard a scream from the middle of the forest then he ran there as fast as he could to see what happened. A person that had a Mudkip was being captured by people called Team Universe. Then two people appeared saying, “Prepare for sadness for when evil badness comes your way and the planets and space are floating away, Team Universe is there to stay!” Maxwell told his Magby to use scratch on them but Team Universe sent out Zubat and Whismur. The boy from Team Universe told his Whismur to use uproar which knocked Magby back then the Zubat from the girl used Leech Life and hurt Maxwell. Maxwell knew he had no chance but he had to do something but then a mysterious man and a Pokemon to fast to be scanned by the pokedex knocked away Team Universe. From that day forth Maxwell would love Pokemon from saving his life but, before Maxwell or the girl could thank them they were gone.
When Maxwell went to continue to the forest the girl thanked Maxwell for trying to help and help get her Mudkip back. As they walked to the end of the forest together the girl was called Amanda and she wanted to be a Pokemon master like Maxwell so they decided to travel together.


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Post by silversalamence10 on Tue Jul 20, 2010 12:25 am

nice chapter torterra, i liked how you made up a villainous team and motto
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Post by Goku on Tue Jul 20, 2010 8:35 am

That motto was awesome.

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Post by Gengar on Tue Jul 20, 2010 8:37 am

the ending was bad i couldn't make it rhyme ok i fixed it
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Post by Goku on Tue Jul 20, 2010 8:40 am

I don't see the difference.

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Post by Gengar on Tue Jul 20, 2010 8:44 am

from team universe is there in your face to team universe is there in your face
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Post by Walshy97 on Tue Jul 20, 2010 9:36 am

graet story and bad guys
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