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Post by madarauchihaobito2 on Fri Jul 23, 2010 12:03 pm

http://lanturnswaterfall.webs.com/
its an awsome new site when it gets filled it will have gyms elite4 fronteir brains and evean teams we have a chat and music and we will have 2 seperate leagues (one for shoddy and one for wifi)
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Re: afiliaation request-lanturnswaterfall (L.W)

Post by Cirrus on Fri Jul 23, 2010 6:02 pm

Lots of spelling and grammar errors and quite new seeing as there's no CB posts. After some activity and revision, maybe a reconsideration, but it seems too new to me. The only thing that compels me is that the song Down is on the playlist, which made me like it more.

Not that my opinion matters anyway. Since it's a frequenter of the forum, maybe.
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Post by Goku on Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:09 pm

I agree with Cirrus. Your site is too new and has way to many Grammar mistakes. Once you fix that I may accept.

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Post by jd896 on Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:43 pm

Like the latter said, too many grammar errors and it's too new of a site. I reject.

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Re: afiliaation request-lanturnswaterfall (L.W)

Post by silversalamence10 on Sat Jul 24, 2010 2:44 am

i also viewed the site and like everyone else said there are some grammar errors
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ok then

Post by madarauchihaobito2 on Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:59 am

i know that i have bad grammar but all you did was look at the bad stuff of my sute but whatever...........
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Post by Goku on Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:16 am

Still your site is too new and not enough people visit it.

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