Jack's Pokemon Journey #Chapter One

'Jack!!' shouted his mum its time to get your first pokemon. Jack woke up and looked at the letter his dad had sent him it read ' dear mucka my new gym is amazing and all the new pokemon trainers to battle hope your ok in the Olmia region with your mum and Alex look after them remember im only in the Isshu region so you will be sure to battle me.
Jack walked out of his house into Cherrytree town he seen his friend Aaron on the way to the pokemon lab so they went together. Proffessor Bark was waiting for them she said ' Now use two i can see that you are strong at heart and want you to complete the pokedex for me and of course you can pick one of these pokemon' Jack chose the fire type pokemon Flardes he nicknamed it Tyrant. Aaron chose the water type pokemon hydre.


This was the start of Jacks pokemon Journey and not the end he will encounter new pokemon and make new friends.

good story walshy, can i be in this story

sure you can u can be the first gym leader
and like brock u decide to travel with me

oh ok then, what type do i have

ermmwich do u want and wot do u want to be called

i want to be called silver and use psychic types

ok
do u have any cool names for ur pokemon

do they have to be made up

at least one made up

the rest u can choose any

ok then, all these are my made up pokemon

sprunk - psychic
springor - psychic
ampy - psychic

ok is that All ur using

yea as a gym leader, but i catch other varieties of pokemon on my journey

ok then u will be in Chapter 3

ok, i'll definately read that

lol me too i want to read it

Thanks for spoiling the story man! Hide those comments, edit them, IDC.
Good start Walshy.

ah but it dont say exactly wot will happen aka who will win

i think in future if i have any ideas for your story i'll do it in PMs, so that the story isn't ruined for other people

ok silver but uu didnt ruin it

yea, but still it was a great chapter, was it supposed to be like a prologue or something

kind of yer

A little too short no offense.

how can you make up random pokemon names it to hard so i combine pokemon from each region


ps. i like this story

i just made it up

Hawker this is just the beginning

But really its shorter than a summary. It needs more detail. That will make it longer.