Jack's Pokemon Journey #Chapter 2

Jack had Just recieved his first pokemon. He met his little brother Alex on the way to route 401 and of course was challenged to a battle.
'Go Tyrant' Shouted Jack.
'Go Karpbas' Hollered Alex.
Jack flipped up his pokedex 'Karpbas the fish pokemon it is so weak that even a magikarp can beat it' read the pokedex.
Jack laughed 'a Karpbas easy'
'Use Tackle' said Alex
'Ha easy Tyrant use Scratch' replied Jack
Karpbas fainted Jack won. Alex ran off moaning. Jack carried on into route 401 and battle his first pokemon wich he skillfully caught. It was a Wormpede 'Wormpede the worm pokemon it uses its sharp teeth to protect itself from predators'. As Jack arrived in Brookvale City he was greeted by a strange character and took to the pokemon center. Then there was a bang then out of no where.
'Prepare for Trouble
And make it double
To pretect the world from devastation
To unite all people within our nation
To announce the evils of truth and love
To extend our reach to the stars above
Its Team Galaxy and were in your face.'
'Thats a stupid name' said Jack ' and what are you doing'
'You better watch that mouth your just a kid we will crush you' Replied Dark
'Really?' asked Jack
'Arghh your so annoying were gonna steal your pokemon and the whole of the worlds' Said Night
'Lets Battle' Shouted Jack 'Go Wormpede'
'Go Zubat' Shouted Dark 'Go Batstor'
'Wormpede string shot' Said Jack
Zubat and Batstor are stuck together. What? Wormpede is evolving into Caconop. Caconop leard heatbutt and harden.
'Caconop use headbutt' Ordered Jack
'Oh no' Said both Dark and Night 'Team galaxy shooting off'
'We beat them Caconop' Cheered Jack 'Now on to the gym'

Jack has now reached brookvale city and is on his way to battle Silver the user of psychic pokemon. Who will win well find out in Chapter 3 of Jack's Pokemon Journey.


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Hope you liked the story.

great story walshy, well done, i thought for a minute that it was team rocket that appeared

yer me too lol then i thought are they copyright so i did team galaxy

Why did you use the same moddo? Sorry but this story is confusing me.. Nice effort though.

Infernhawk wrote:Why did you use the same moddo? Sorry but this story is confusing me.. Nice effort though.

Too right mate....

wot do u mean hawker

Its so short and hard to understand. Theres so many grammar mistakes and its hard to follow. Also the new Pokemon shouldn't be nicknamed because we don't know what the Pokemon is. Maybe you should put in
( ) what the Pokemon is.

ok sorry hawker